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Monday 16 May 2016

The Mad scientist

Walht: Write an interesting and enjoyable narrative


It was a hot Summer day when Franklin an mad scientist wanted to work on an experiment to make something turn into a giant. Franklin wasn’t like any normal scientist who wore big lab coats, he liked to dress up in streetwear clothing. His skin colour was pale, his eyes were light blue, His height was at average and he was an outgoing person with dark brown hair. Franklin wanted to Invent a potion to turn something into an giant.


“Baaaaaringgggg” Franklin’s alarm goes off for him to go on his daily afternoon stroll. Every corner franklin turned it was silent no noise at all, Franklin felt awkward knowing no one was around. Sweat dripping down Franklin's face as he got nervous. Franklin starts power walking towards the beach, as he hears music passing through his ears. As Franklin got near the beach then BOOM  he viewed everyone jumping up and down having an day out at the beach. Everyone pulled Franklin aside and made him eat bbq with them. “Mmmm the BBQ was delicious” Franklin said. Franklin wanted to stay and have fun with everyone but sadly Franklin had to leave to go to the secret lab.


Franklin arrives at the secret lab. Franklin was nervous as he walked inside the lab because it was his first time making a potion that could turn into a giant. Franklin then gathered all of the antidote together and started mixing them all. Franklin then started to get frustrated because the potion was coming out right. Franklin mixed and he twirled and he swirled the potions together but you could see frustration on his face as the potion wasn’t right.  SUDDENLY a ferocious gust of wind blew the potion all over Franklin. “AHHHH” Franklin yelled as he started growing bigger. “Everyone catch Franklin” the government said so we can experiment on him and find out how to turn things bigger. Franklin then got scared and ran behind the abandoned hospital hiding from the fbi. Franklin was shaking scared the ground was shaking and it felt like an earthquake was happening.


Franklin then stopped shaking. He opened the door to the abandoned hospital and walked thru. Franklin was worried that something terrible was going to happen to him. “Bang, Clash, Crash” Franklin falls over. “OUCHH! That was sore” Franklin said. All of a sudden franklin put a smile on his face, “Yasss” Franklin yelled I found the cure. Franklin was overwhelmed that he had found the cure and he drank it. “POOF” Franklin was back to being an normal human being again.


After Franklin transformed back into a human being he had promised to himself that he wouldn’t touch another chemical again. Franklin then went to his lab and threw out all of his antidotes and potions and never touched another potion again.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Hello Tane
I like how you included the police force and the FBI in your story. You must have put a lot of effort in your writing. My writing was about this teenage boy who grew smaller like an ant. Why did you decide to make your main character a mad scientist?

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