“look” shouted the little boy called Franklin while he was trying to tell his mate called Trevor move out of the way of the speeding traffic. Trevor jumped out of the way of the speeding traffic and jump in the Zentorno with Franklin and they raced off home.
When they arrived home they walked into Franklin mansion to go and check on his dog called chop was ok so Franklin and Trevor went to the race track in their own cars.
Franklin was driving a Zentorno and Trevor was driving a Jester. When they arrived the the race track the started up their engine and took off. Trevor was in the lead then he crashed and Franklin won the race.
Trevor was in a coma Franklin speeded back to Trevor and put him in the car and zoomed off with Trevor to the hospital. When they arrived at the hospital the ambulance people took him inside with them rushing to a room. Trevor was in a coma for 10 days and Franklin waited for those 10 days.
On the tenth day Trevor woke up and the doctors couldn't believe what they seen they said that it was a miracle that Trevor could still be alive. Franklin picked him up the next day and took him home.
2 comments:
Kia Ora Tane
I found your story interesting and confusing at the same time. I found it interesting because Trevor survived the crash and I found it confusing because your story didn't make any sense. Did you edit your work when you finished?
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