Sharky

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One day their was a boy that owned a shark named Cripple. Cripple was a feisty shark that would only listen to Edward. Cripple only listened to Edward because he was the one that found it and took care of it.Every Night Edward would let Cripple go and Wonder the sea when Edward was tired.

Edward owned a beach house in miami.Edward lived in a house with his brother named Freeman.Freeman never liked Cripple because it has almost bitten Freeman leg once.

Suddenly Edwards Brother Freeman Threw something into the water that made Cripple get knocked out.When Cripple was knocked out Freeman took Cripple to land and tried to make him suffocate.

In the morning Edward noticed that Cripple was not back so he went looking for him.Edward knew that sharky could only last out of water for 12 hours so he tried hard to look for him.4 hours straight Edward was still searching for Cripple he knew that he only had 8 hours left. 4 hours later he found Cripple and he ride back his fastest to his home and put Cripple back in the water.